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RE: Novalis [Day 20]

in #poetry7 years ago

Gorgeous stuff, here, Alain, in every stanza a startling, memorable image. I single out these 2, but I might as well have picked another 2 or 4. Good work, man!

"with clouds
hanging from
creaky wooden
rafters
...

heaven checking
her hair in a puddle"

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