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RE: PETALS (A Collaborated Poetry)
Enjoyed the poem like crazy @dante31 and @Josediccus; my little micro poetry tease.
she's like a pistol that doesn't piss off
Her aura can grieve my haters
Without her I can't be better
My dying breathe lingers as immortals
From her moonlight kiss which matters
Thanks buddy ...
You are not bad yourself.
I like your last 2 lines.
Awesome
Thanks man!