I enjoyed reading your poem. You developed on the character very nicely, and you also drew out rich metaphors of both night's darkness (something haunting) and daylight (something yearned after and out-of-reach). I came away thinking the dawn and the day is sensed in all its beautiful sights and sounds and scents from a lonely, secluded place, but not so far away. interesting how the word eerie is used - I felt loneliness - eerie nights have ghosts that haunt - ghosts we dare not look upon.