You nailed it! Such progression - like it follows a lifespan - and the meter is well-chosen - it feels like an aged person walking steadily and slowly. IMO, this is award-winning poetry right here!
You nailed it! Such progression - like it follows a lifespan - and the meter is well-chosen - it feels like an aged person walking steadily and slowly. IMO, this is award-winning poetry right here!
Thank you for flattering me so much hahhaha
Not flattery - just honest remarks, my friend. ;-)