Great poem @markjason I do agree that love really takes time.
Btw I just notice and got confused on this one
a love who waits
is the love that never lasts.
On the verses after this it shows that patience is the key for the love to last it seems like contradicting though.
edited, I'm confused also in that one,
word rumble
freewrite haha, by the way thank you for noticing.
That's the reason why! Freewriting can really give some of this stuff. Now everything is in pieces and the idea is complete. I do hope that it will be noticed by some folks and you have some good upvotes on this piece bro.
thanks you bro. :)_