Hey! I like the ideas that you're exploring here- they are definitely relevant to a lot of women. I think you might avoid rhetorical questions in the next one, at least a series of them- they aren't as effective in poetry when there are a lot of them. Also, make sure that your rhyme scheme forms a pattern of some kind- your first stanza and your second stanza have a couple of lines that rhyme, then the rest of the stanzas don't have any rhyme at all. If you're on discord at all, I run a poetry workshop at the Minnow Support Project and at the Writers Block that you're welcome to put your poetry in prior to posting and get some feedback!