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RE: Burning Eyes — A poem about sleep deprivation in iambic pentameter
Hey Sharon.
Love the ending.
Poems aren't really my skin, but maybe Im just a tough hunk of ice :D
Cheers
Hey Sharon.
Love the ending.
Poems aren't really my skin, but maybe Im just a tough hunk of ice :D
Cheers
:) Thank you. And don't worry. :) I spent a long time not liking poems and I still don't think I like them the way normal people do. In fact many poems the majority praise I find dull and unworthy of my attention.
This kind of emotional poem, however, really grabbed my passion. It's like a word filter to let out my thoughts in a "purer" way. I don't write many of them, but when I do I'm really proud.