Day 4 of 100 - Crush and Fall
I see you, my heart races
My chest begins to ache
A shiver runs up and down my spine
My knees almost give out
What is this spell you have over me?
How is that I feel so weak around you?
Where did you acquire such abilities?
Why does it hurt so much?
I will turn away, I will walk away
But my head turns not
My legs are too scared to move
My spine remains ever rigid
You smile at me and approach
My mind melts like wax
My eyes see nothing else but you
Walking ever so majestically, my queen
"Hey, how are you?"
My heart stops, I freeze
I try to answer but my mouth can't move
I can't believe you spoke to me
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I hear myself forming words
I can't comprehend them
I comprehend you comprehensively
You touch me, warm like the morning sun
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Whew, someone else calls
Saved, we will meet again you say
You walk away smiling
My head in the stars
My heart slows, my frame revives
My mind forms and starts working
Gosh you are beautiful
I am mesmerized
That could have gone worse
Friends walk up to me carrying puzzles
"Real smooth, bro. Real smooth"
I can't tell if it's true or sarcastic
OMW, I feel the tension, it's so intense. It's feels you were present when I Crushed and Fell.
Big ups @skodie
Seems this feeling is universal. There's always that one person who would leave you weak in the knees. I hope yours went better than that of the character in my poem. Thanks for the read
Wow hahaa.. that was really smooth bro.. till you meet again.. dont forget to tell how it went.. this is my poem for the day.
Thanks love. Appreciate it. I may continue this or may not. Let's see what the future brings. Thanks for commenting
You are welcome love
Wow, the First experiences are the scariest, you've said it all in your words and it's pretty awesome.
Talking like someone who had a similar experience. Thanks for the compliment, man. 96 more poems to go