ORIGINALITY (An Experimental Original Poem)

in #poetry8 years ago

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This is ORIGINAL poetry material.
What?
You've seen this before?
That's a lie,
this
is
Original Poetry,
no clichés; no repetition...

no suicidal talk
no love chat.

"No!" as I said, no clichés.

My pen is blue and I want to kill
You.
Because my Id is talking over my ego.
I realise things others don't.

What is wrong with me?
Where does this poem belong?
Love?
Life?
NSFW?
Or is it
just rumble?

The above is a fragment for consideration underlined green!
Press F7, look at the advice.

Stupid mind!
No love talk...

Ignore myself?
I think it's hard.
This isn't poetry?
But now... what if it is?

Am I talking to myself now?

I've gone to the
wrong page.

~Just finished work~
this
is
getting too long...
As I said
"No repetition"
"No clichés"
Original poetry...

2:15 AM,
recording "number 6",
what on
earth
am I doing?
I'm whispering into my phone!

Masturbation-realization...

Random sentences.

I need to
write down
my thoughts
in a poem.
"Oh damn"
I am writing them down
~Insert a scream here~

No... no clichés, no repetition,
repetition, repetition,
Clichés?

10 days of heaven,
I just woke up!
I'm still writing
this down,
is there an end?

No clichés; randomization; originality;
The end!


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