A dip and a bump

in #poetry7 years ago

2018-1-18 Kleinlein river mountain.jpg

What a day!
Some did say
Always this way
In January

A skinny dip
In waters frigid
Bob to surface
Inhale breathless

Said want to fly
All of the time
But touchdown
Every while

Even smile
Into unseen
Great potential
Latent dream

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GREAT POETRY THANKS FOR SHAREING

Sure thing—thanks for reading!

I liked the disjointed nature of the lines. It really makes the dreamlike quality come out after reading the final lines. Nice write.

Glad you enjoyed it, and I really appreciate the thoughtful comment.

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This image really makes me feel relaxed

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