Poetry Slam challenge 11 - I Thought I saw You

sazbird (64)in #poetry • 8 years ago

I thought I saw you

Was I dreaming?

You took my hand

Wreckage strewn around me

The dream

My noble plan

I grit my teeth against the pain

As I lie here

On this sand

Fevered hopes for rescue

The sky, the seas

I scan

I pray this note to find you

Tell my love

As best I can

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8 years ago in #poetry by sazbird (64)

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bleujay (71) 8 years ago

Thank you for posting @sazbird. Lovely......touching...wistful....hopeful.

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sazbird (64) 8 years ago

Thank you @bleujay, that is a very kind comment

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