You create beauty of the poem. Your works inspire to comment with this words. I hope you accept it.

all the time flows like a tributary
he will continue to descend towards the open sea certainly
the journey of life is like a steady stream of water
to one stop point; sea, sea death, dear

it's not a matter of dying, honey, not at all
death is just a door to open a new chapter
a door of time that will be the way to another dimension
how death will bring you to life is far more meaningful

In the clear water of eternal life
you will find worthy retribution
make a karma of what you have done
goodness will get pleasure

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WArm regard from Indonesia