Redemption (A Poem)
Are promises of redemption
Nothing but empty lies?
Only to be shattered to countless
Pitiable pieces; lost in the abyss.
A bloodied but warm hand
Reached out, pulling him out.
To see the glorious light,
And into a serene paradise...
Bags of Goodness
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This is a powerful poem. The contrast between darkness and light and the poignant imagery contribute to an interesting, thought-provoking meditation on the nature of redemption. The use of a broken doll in the first line was especially nice. Thanks for posting!
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