Lines on me... (Original of Carlos González)

in #poetry6 years ago

Lines on me...

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Lose sight of the infinite horizon of my thoughts,

literary expression of the poet who translates emotions into verses,

says many truths that become soft rhymes when reading.

Musicality in the words and sounds of many alliterations.

repeat and repeat words that allow us to emphasize and their anaphora;

- With the pain of a loved one leaving.

- With the pain of losing a good friend.

- With pain do not hammer an opportunity.

In the end always the winner will be the pain that can not be endured.

Sounds that you can imagine while reading from the drum when you redouble,

Tum, tum, tum, tum. When love touches the doors of your heart.

Onomatopoeia of the sound of the soul when you can feel its arrival.

Compare a beautiful flower with your most adored being, with the metaphor,

the sublime art of the poet arrives to climb to the highest and coldest peak.

The last hope in your words that are full of loneliness.

Hyperbole of our loves and disappointments stamped in books.

Like the thunder of the falling lightning and the swift humming of your kisses.

Metonymy of the verse between love and the strength that comes down from the heavens.

In one hand I will cover the years covered by our finger-to-finger love.

Synecdoche of our love, paper weddings, five-pointed star,

thus, we are washing our evils with the filth of reality itself.

Paradoxes and personifications that let the flowers cry,

children turtured by the daily bulling of their own and other minions.

Poetry is the vehicle of protests and graceful ways of loving,

dagger that sinks in the stomach of the convicted and confessed murderer.

Friends I have used my verses to make a reference, of some of the literary resources used by poets, such as:

-Metaphor

-Epípeto.

-Comparison

-Hyperbole.

-Metonymy

-Synecdoche

-Paradox

-Personification, among others ...

Thanks for reading my lines.

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