A misty dusk

in #poetry7 years ago

It returns to its comfort, it golden
It a misty dusk, browny yellow
Sagged overhead ropes above my head
Barren street lamps with dead wombs
Tall rails and mask with drums
I was told it aids communication
Hear me am communicating

Evening classes over, with the long week
Bell suspended, with a smile so weak

Blaring soft music to cool the day
It a hectic week with long schedules
My part, the week was wasted...

Catch up at "daddy kitchen and bar"
Wait! Chicken republic's over there
Let drown the stress, swim in enjoyment

If only there was light,
You would see the beauty of the city
They caused, light ceased
And in hopelessness we hope

It a misty dusk. image
Image source: pixabay

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Thanks for reading!

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Awwww... My baby on this one... Go on gal

Smiles,thanks darling.

I enjoyed the mixture of clarity and uncertainty portrayed through your writing, as if on the cusp of some grand realization.

Thank you @d-pend really appreciate your comment

Hello @rebeccafl, your tags are wrong and the post is beautiful. Try using genesisproject and nigeria as separate tags, thank you.

Noted!, thank u

I enjoy your choice of words and how it protrays the message. It is beautifully written with a mixture of uncertainty and certainty..LOL..U HAVE MY VOTE ON THIS ONE.

Smiles, thank you @khojo

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