Thanks hazem I'm glad the poem spoke to you. And you noticed the rhythm of the Ghazal. I still remember writing it, even though it was more than 10 years ago and then I was trying to make sure it had a strong rhythmic feel to fit in with all the auditory descriptions. When I edited/re-wrote it yesterday before publishing this version I tried to tweak the rhythm a bit and its great to hear that it hasn't gone noticed.

Thanks for reading as well as your vote and comment :-)