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RE: Dancing with Myles

in #poetry7 years ago

I loved the rhythm of this poem, especially the last stanza. The last stanza speaks a lot. Great expression that he drops you, walks away and comes back to torment you.

However, the second stanza doesn't fit so well with me, its rhythm isn't as flowing as the rest. Overall, it is a great poem anyway :)

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Thanks...I'll make sure to work on upcoming poems better...

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