Hello @kweenzykruzy

Not only did I enjoyed reading through the lines of such an amazing work as this Kneen, you have brought live to the weak soul, you lines expressed the use of imagery intertwine with the hurdles of life and finding peace of mind.
You played ironically with words, the truth was told metaphorically, placing side by side the elements of Oxymoron. That's the level of your creativity Queen.

I'm caught in thin lines with fate
Would I allow it to throw me back to abyss
Where I struggled to free my being from torture..
Torture of the heart and soul
Where everything is decided by the master
The master of doom!!!

Let me freestyle small... Cus I am enjoying this like meal.

When once in life would I find joy and peace of mind,
I have wondered like a wanderer
Toiling tro and fro
Seeking a happiness
Yet I find sadness
Seeking peace
Yet I found trouble.
Life, I choose and crave for the good in everything.
This is the best thing that had happened to me and that's poetry. Have been exposed to life from the expression of people. ADiePoetIsMe.

You are good Madam