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RE: Ruler of this succulent illusion [Day 13]

in #poetry7 years ago

I see your face in the depth of your imagination
I hear your voice calling out from the dream world
And your illusions are so real, they became reality

I see the sparks in your eyes as you send me into trance
Your eyelids covered in story of an afterlife
Your lips talks in languages from another world

Fire in your eyes
Stories on your eyelids
Strange languages from your lips

All are the creations of your illusion
Oh great illusionist
Creating a world that never existed

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