Shattered Dreams

in #poetry7 years ago

imageSource
It was supposed to be the perfect Christmas,
Lights illuminating the chapel at mass,
And a walk in the park after,
Two of us alone together;
But not as I anticipated,
Fate had another thing in store
image Source
Ruthlessly, our love, apart it tore,
For you didn’t chose a better day, a day before
The day of our tryst; sitting under
The mango tree, rain begetting thunder,
Bodies locked, lips on lips;
Consummating our love with a psalm;
imageSource
You said goodbye alright, eyes wide open, loudly
Communicating feelings words would make cloudy;
You went dead cold in my hands,
Leaving me alone without friends;
And I’m left between reality and daydream;
Our plans shattered forever.


i'll drop my @Officialpen here My poem seems to b short but the rhymes are so divinely

If you love this, please do not hesitate to follow, @officialpen upvote and resteem.
I'm staying for the community

Sort:  

This is brilliant. I loved the choice of your words. Plus the rhymes made it all the more fun to read. Also, you spoke of articulated your emotions really well. :)

I'm thankful for your review, I hope my next poem will be more vital than previous, thanks for the recommendation.
I'm a loyal newbie in the community that needs support

That's great news. We all need support here. You have mine.

Coin Marketplace

STEEM 0.16
TRX 0.16
JST 0.028
BTC 69221.02
ETH 2416.51
USDT 1.00
SBD 2.37