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     6 years ago 

    Well, the theme of the poem is about empty and broken promises, so I decided to end it like that.

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     6 years ago 

    I really like it, maybe one more hopefull line :)

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     6 years ago (edited)

    I like it as is.Heartfelt and honest.
    The power for positive influence is in the emotional effect. Not by inciting wishful imagination.

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