As I Lay
As I lay motionless in a stream of tears,
The past collides with the future and sums up my fears. After all these years I have dwelled
In a systematic compensation of living I call life.
The tender touches of a loved one seem so touching.
The loves of a partner, so loving,
But are things, as they seem,
Or is this all just another one of my lucid dreams.
How compelling the night falls of thought, and the sunrise Of reality.
Poetry Credit: Me (Saad Manasterli)
Photo Credit: Me (Saad Manasterli)
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Thank you so much. Please read my other stuff and let me know what you think. The feeling when some one else reads and appreciates your work, makes all the downs worth it.
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'As I lay motionless in a stream of tears,
The past collides with the future and sums up my fears'
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this is beautiful, very cool creative expression, thanks for sharing!
Thank you for reading and appreciating it as much as I enjoy writing. Please check out my other stuff and let me know if you can relate to them as well. Thank you so much.
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Thank you, please check out my other poems and I would would love to hear your thoughts. I ry to write one a day and post it.