"Last of my Light" - a song by Mr. Fluid, loosely based on Albert Camus' "The Stranger"

in #poetry8 years ago

Introduction:

Just over a year ago, I wrote and recorded a song for the project Yarbrough & Mr. Fluid: Small Talk EP, available as a free download online at

http://nuprogramrecords.com/album/yarbrough-mr-fluid-small-talk-ep-promo

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The lyrics are loosely based on the novel The Stranger by Albert Camus.

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I say "loosely" because much of the story has been changed, the characters, the setting, etc., yet the song was directly influenced by the novel, and I wrote and recorded it immediately after finishing the paperback. Not a pure adaptation, to be clear, but you will see what has been taken and discarded for yourself when you read the lyrics and/or listen to the song, which you can do so by streaming the above link. I hope you enjoy.

"Last of my Light"

(v1)

seven christmases passed

before the lights went out

family gathered

father pushes box

gift wrapped

toward the child

his smile widens

peeps his pops

in the peripheral

smirkin

rips the gift open

sees he got jerked

the box empty

both parents

laughin in fits

the child angry

til he sees

the authentic gift

a red bike

with matching helmet

hid in the next room

happy then

but things fell

pops laid off in june

cheap bourbon

on ice

candles lit for sight

a loaded 45 cal

hidden by night

father

penniless, tired

keeps car runnin

runs in

the gas station

masked

barrel aimed at the arab

pigs

enter the scene

spill blood

where there was once love

pops dies sudden

hand bloody

on the cold gun

pics in his wallet

of fam

left hungry

boy learns to provide

food and strength

for his mother

from nothing

(hook)

sometimes i feel like

nothing at all

no one inside

to prevent the fall

sometimes i feel like

less than a man

something robotic

no use for a plan

sometimes i feel

i'm slippin away

no grip on life

or recollection of days

sometimes i wander

no path in sight

it's like i've used up

the last of my light

(v2)

mother dissolves

in the hardship of it all

boy callus to the world

earns well

despite pitfalls

joy stolen

works hard

but never opens up

relationships fail

makes a home

but never homies

lives alone

met a weekend fling

he saw before

in a dream

she clings close

likes her more

than most

she ask

about marriage

he shrugs

they might as well

but can't

say he loves her

at all

that's not his thing

the night

before the big day

they're out

on the town

havin drinks

by the spillway

and walkin around

a thief appears

with a long blade

and threatens

their life

he points a pistol

at the man

who then

drops the knife

no longer

endangered

he empties a clip

into the stranger

the girl runs quick

away from his eyes

skin pale as white light

he steps back

quiet

the pigs arrive

and read his rights

to no reply

he's gone

(hook)

sometimes i feel like

nothing at all

no one inside

to prevent the fall

sometimes i feel like

less than a man

something robotic

no use for a plan

sometimes i feel

i'm slippin away

no grip on life

or recollection of days

sometimes i wander

no path in sight

it's like i've used up

the last of my light

(v3)

inside

he realizes

an explosion

was waiting

in his soul

always

since the day

pops drove

away

with a gun

to keep the lights on

livin one

day at a time

bygones be bygones

dead spirits likewise

he saw himself

like the gift

on his seventh christmas

an empty box

promising nothing

repentless

no bike

in the next room tho

he never rode much

so

stuck

on naked truth

life took on a gray hue

void of color

he learned to like it

that way

he never saw red

til he unloaded

on the stranger

something

burst inside

his psyche regressed

he was once again a child

inside a prison cell

but life

was now clear

he had time

to rebuild

all the pieces

of his spirit

thought dead

now cheerful

he had to hit bottom

to rediscover self

found a piece

of the boy

before he had

nothing left

(hook)

sometimes i feel like

nothing at all

no one inside

to prevent the fall

sometimes i feel like

less than a man

something robotic

no use for a plan

sometimes i feel

i'm slippin away

no grip on life

or recollection of days

sometimes i wander

no path in sight

it's like i've used up

the last of my light

Written by Mr. Fluid, 2015

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