Maybe distance gives us a reason to love harder-mrblu poem

in #poetry7 years ago


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Maybe distance gives us a
reason to love harder
While absence sharpens love,

yet presence strengthens it.
Sometimes I like the way you make me
feel even when you’re nowhere near

I have no idea how true this is, all I know is
I’m just here going to love you and wait for you.
Hoping I will see you soon.
I miss you so much, my love.

I’m proud of us for holding on, even if we are both so far away
from each other, your miles and miles away from me.
but then my heart will always be yours.

Long distance relationship is hard but remember this my love taking care and working together to make our relationship will grow and showing both respects, loyalty, and love will always in our presence

To hold on to each other no matter what happens.
our love will always be true.

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congratz bro,,sweet like your post that she gave you a better upvote

i think your wife or girlfriend is very lucky to have such a romantic guy like you mrblu, well done!

thank you @sweetsssj i'm so happy that you like it..^_^yup

nice piece bro. keep on sharing!

yes @sweetsssj...because the romantic guy is the ideal guy

@mrblu thank you for sharing this poem and the emotions and feelings you express through it. Love can be a tricky thing, never the same, and always changing or different.

My favorite parts of the poem are at the beginning; i think they are the strongest expressions and best combination of words. The later half of the poem got confusing and longer distracted. I didn't understand the images after the first two stanzas.

The first two stanzas were great because they danced this line between opposites, how the speaker confesses that he sometimes likes the way distance makes him lover her more. I also enjoyed how the first stanza was about how distance sharpens and strengthens love.

Thanks again for sharing.

thank you so much for appreciating my poem.^_^

wonderful poem sir. definitely resteemed.

thanks ^_^

Beautiful poem 😊

thanks for always supporting my poem..

Love travels any distance. It is the most powerful of sorcerers. Never give up .<3

yes thats true

I know i have been in love once. But when i really know she loved me was when i travel out of the country.

Yes, people say distance kill love but left to me distance is a test to love and any love bird that survive distance can not be sepreated.

Love your poem @mrblu is well inspired.

@godswill

thanks for appreciating my poem @godswill, yes you are corect..

Distance won’t matter if both hearts are too close to each other. Wish you both the best in life!

wow. beautiful ng poem. came from the heart. ;)

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