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RE: Happy Anniversary - Day 98

in #poetry7 years ago

You are 100% blessed. The photo belongs to you but he doesn't. He is one with you forever.

You are blessed to write this down and share it.
You will also strengthen others.

I am blessed to read your poem and really don't consider myself worthy to comment but I was assigned to "critique" your poem. Who am I a heart specialist? I've read so many poems, stories and jokes but seldom do I respond with emotion.

I share and feel your story. There is a power in the story that convicts, heals and mends. There is no jargon and endless patterns of repetition but a story coming to life in poetry form.

As for my own marriage we are just getting to our twentieth anniversary and all the shortcomings and disagreements we had seem so small compared to the thought that one day we will not see each other on earth.

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