And There Will Be No More Pain [@mindhunter POEM ORIGINAL*]
Pain strikes through my body
Like lighting strikes a tree
Breathe in, breathe out
The world fading fast
A picture is painted, the colours are bold
One for each season of life I suppose
Staggering breathe, then cough
Like when I fall asleep
Last breath
Heart slows to a stop
Nothing is smell
Nothing is sight
No more pain
Everything is so cold
Gone...
*Poem inspired by a quote from Stratovarius (We Are Magic)
Excellent pacing @mindhunter
Pacing & Rhythm: 7/10 / Imagery: 4/10 / Overall: 5/10 ;)
(never let it be said that I don't take a dose of my own critical medicine!)
Dark photo. Dark poem.
Surely there is hope in that title if you want there to be hope?? ;)
.............................................................................as the soul floats off into the ether........................................................................................................................
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Your poetry really surprises me @mindhunter
Me too! I don't know where it comes from??
Awaken! The end will come
scared restless
at a crossroads
a ticking clock
With what memories
my friend
unlearn his past
remembering old times
Nice poem completion going on there!
Oh! I do know where it all comes from....the subconscious mind :)
or maybe a boet? ahahaha they started flagging my nice poems this place is just a HUGE CENTRALIZED SCAM!!!! I c you around somewhere else @mindhunter
The Ugly Truth Behind Steemit
I think the truth lies in a price below $0.30!
Man! That is some serious death by flagging?! Why??