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RE: On the edge of the abyss/@prydefoltz

in #poetry6 years ago

Love the imagery, @corderosiete

I particularly like the first half:

From the twilight
I wear the color
from the abyss
on my shoulders
and a vertiginous fear
around me.

This shows me the speaker in your poem has been there in the depths of that abyss; he know what is like, and yet he's walking the plank.

Well penned ☻

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