Ode to My Jeans Shoes
Ode to My Jeans Shoes
Can't recall how I fall to you
Outstanding pair among the rest
I Picked you up from the counter
And I simply leave the rest
I take you out to my first date
To the airport picking up my soulmate
I purchased another shoes
From a girl named sue
It was expensive and very blue
I wear it once and I'm becoming blue
I hate it cause it makes me blue
So I got back to you
Clearly nothing can outstand you
My comfortable pair of shoes
Thoughts
I don't know If it is necessary to mention " Original Poetry" because I've seen a lot people mention it in their post. Well,I usually don't mention that because I write when I want to and when I have the inspiration. So, obviously all of them are my own and often written spontaneously
very nice poem. :) the words and rhyme are perfect. and hand me some coffee please. i need it right now. :)
Haha thank you! hands you a cup of coffee
Good Stuff @macchiata! :-) Love it!
Thank you @robynegss :)
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