Very beautiful. Your words speak directly to my heart. There is an erotic theme present all throughout the poem, and this adds beauty to this already mesmerizing in itself piece of art. The idea of creating love to someone simply blew me away. I am very impressed and believe this poem deserves a lot of recognition. Keep up the great work, and always create the art that will always be there. :)

Also, if you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too.