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RE: **HOW DID WE GET HERE?**

in #poetry7 years ago

Beautiful freewrite and interesting the way you present your thoughts.

In pieces i shattered
My soul battered
Will i ever recover from this tragedy?
The only one who made me feel a prodigy

I think this is the verse I like the most, it express exactly the pains we face when the one we once loved becomes a stranger.

Overall the poem is interesting. Keep on with the great work @iamceezee.

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Thank you..i really appreciate you for your support and encouragement

@snook @simgirl your contributions on this post will be highly appreciated as i'm warming up for the freewrite contest..thank you

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