Literary Art : "When I Saw You"

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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When I Saw You

I woke up with the thoughts in my head
Still lying on my comfortable bed
Making sounds and trying to forget
What happened yesterday when we met

I saw you on our favorite place
With a face that is so amazed
Maybe thinking how we used to be
And how we made each other so happy

I was still in a bit shock
And I left myself being locked
On where I am standing
When I happen to see you smiling

But I know I gave up on you
And did not gave a good fight for you
For I know you will be better
When I choose to be a far away admirer

You are in your glazing smile
As I saw you standing in less than a mile
How I wish I can hold your hand
Kiss you and make a stronger bond

The love is still there and will always remain
Until my death, I will be in vain
For I did not fight for the both of us
And leave you that's so unjust.


Poetry is a literary art which expresses one's thoughts.


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Reading this pains me. Huhuhu

did not give a good fight for you

Yeah. That really breaks the heart when you know you have not give a good fight.

Ooohhh that pains a little more because it is the truth.

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