SteemitPoetryContest #10: Loop
My entry to @terrycraft's Steemit Poetry Contest #10
Loop
Trapped in a dark room
Filled with fluid as you roam
For nine months of being alone
And with scream and pain, you are born.
Crawl, stand, and then fall
Until you learn how to walk without a wall
To talk is your mother’s next goal
And have a profession as you grow tall.
Proudly walking with hips swaying
Till your knees and back are aching
Hair turns grey with wrinkles display
And then back to the darkness, physically.
💋 kneelyrac 💋
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I really enjoyed this poem. The whole set-up reminded me a bit of
"The seven Ages of Man" by our boy Will, only a bit more compressed. Hope you have a nice day!
Just woke and this made my day. Thank you so much!! I'm going to check that out. Haven't heard about that till now. Have a nice day ahead!
That's a beautiful piece up there, am a poet too but am kinda reserved for some time now, but with this beautiful post up there am gonna wake up, thanks and keep it up
Wow! Thanks for your positive feedback! You should start making poems. There are plenty of poetry contest here including mine. :) Good luck! :)
Wow, that was quite something!! The rhythm and relivance to topic was on point. Great poem @kneelyrac.
Thank you!! :)
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beautiful poetry!
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