Crimes - Original Poem.

in #poetry7 years ago

I hope that you will revel in my rhetorical reverence. The content of this is somewhat personal, perhaps I will elaborate upon it one day.   


After a decade of deviant decadence

the defendant displays his dismay  

at the decision made regarding his fate. 

An affront to all, the crimes clearly evident.   


The actor acted in an air of sheer malevolence. 

Kin shall divide the estate,  

once the malfeasant miscreant has payed, 

his crimes deserving corporeal severance.      


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Interesting Case man. I hope you got out the best of that experience... Welcome to Steemit Poets United Community :)

This is great! Trips my "says so much more than the words" trigger and feeds my love of alliteration :)

Thank you! I was afraid that is may have been a little excessive haha

Gotta say I'm quite curious about what it means to you. Well written :)

Thank you very much! I think I might write a few blog posts eventually that might give a bit of insight hahaha

Awesome! Can't wait to read all about the back story on this one... Cheers!

I'll get around to writing about it someday, haha.. Thanks!!!

Such an ominous feel. Plus the line making it personal gives it whole different depth

Thanks! Ill have to elaborate more on what its about sometime..

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