The Mushroom Effect

in #poetry7 years ago

A dancing cloud of irradiated orange
Shoots into the sky
A convulsion shakes the Earth
And a million hapless souls cry
In an instant I am completely cooked
No skin, or meat left for dinner
I let out a disheartening croak
But fall dead the next minute

Like a paper doll, I crumple down
My shadow is left behind
Forever now it hugs the ground
My charred bones by it's side

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i love the poem

I read this three times. The metaphors and imagery paint a daunting picture of war and violence seen clearly within so few lines, is amazing. Following.

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