Hi there my friend, this is like another camel through the needle eye, I mean this poem had to do with nature.
The description of elements like fire and water makes it feel a bit magical, however I saw and felt your sereneness at the ending line.

You know the free verse made it a bit sophistication in the sense that one could not gather the themes embedded in each verse.

But I tell you, you had all the sweet touches of metaphors with a little imagery description, and you painted nature so sweetly with this.

One of the best I know @d-pend