Star Fall
And found a black stone
So I never go into the woods alone.
Just at dusk when the west is red
I saw a star fall
And felt the dread.
In autumn there is a witching tree
And you never go there
Except with me.
When the leaves are bright
And the nights are cold
There are dark secrets that can’t be told.
I saw a star fall
Out of the sky
Stars are still falling
when
I
look
in
your
eyes
lovely. Is the last line a form of concrete poetry?
yes, actually...meant to imitate the falling star
Clever bugger! Lol
Excellent. i like your pome and upvoted.
thanks
Really beutiful poem ! 👌
Deserve upvotes 👍👍👍
thanks @akkha
You are welcome !
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That is quite and image!
thank you
I like how you've incorporated rhyme without it being overpowering in this piece. Falling, falling... a lovely write. :)
Great post @johnjgeddes
a very artful and very fitting image of your poem.
thank you
Beautifully written, John. I love all your poetry...
thank you, Ceci :)