This is lovely lyrical writing - too bad about the format of parts one and two. You seem to be having difficulty with coding. You'll have to go on steemit chat and ask for help with that because no one will read your stuff if it's not attractively presented.
The good news, my friend, is you can write. At times, it almost looks like my writing - when I do lyrical pieces that blur the line between prose and poetry.
I'll be following you
Thanks jonhj. As you can see I just started this steemit. It was recommended by a good friend @jonyoudyer. I'm already liking the poet community, lots of potential on here and some actualized. I also write a lot of straight forward narrative as well. I like all these contests. Hopefully I can win some.
Thanks for the advice. I'll be checking that out ASAP.
Would you recommend any #'s or other steemers worth checking out?
I fixed it, but I still do not like the preview thing. Anyway to remove that?
you probably have a line of code at the end of your edited version that begins with an exclamation mark ! followed by [] and a URL in round brackets ( ). Highlight the whole damn thing and delete it.
After your last reply I got on it and fixed it. I'm gonna have to study more of this code because you're right no one but family wants to read unappealing texts.