You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Cameo of UsView the full contextView the direct parentjohnjgeddes (75)in #poetry • 7 years ago thank you, Jose
Your second verse has an ABAB rhyme scheme, i use this too in my poems
actually, the whole poem uses alternate rhyme, somewhat disguised by the use of proximate or near rhyme. Usually this rhyme scheme is used to covey a sense of conflict, but I'm using it here to convey the notion of duality :)
Well that would be poetic license buddy no limit no boundaries, i still feel they make a mark in the mind
yes, so do I :)