Girlfriend Electric
Haunts me
nights;
But your image
Dies
At first light.
I talk
With you
In dreams,
But static
Clouds
What you mean.
This attraction
charged
By sighs and touches
electrifies
The air
About us.
Haunts me
nights;
But your image
Dies
At first light.
I talk
With you
In dreams,
But static
Clouds
What you mean.
This attraction
charged
By sighs and touches
electrifies
The air
About us.
Powerful... I like this A Lot!
thanks, @misssiontothemoon
great post upvoted you keep going
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@johnjgeddes Thanks for publishing this Charming instant in time for yourself..
@johnjgeddes Excellent Tale. Awesome you ended up in the position to hustle your way out of your respective condition.
Beautiful and dark.
I think this should be continued for about two times longer :) I love it.
thanks @minnowsupports
@johnjgeddes nice poem. upvoted
kindly check my poem thanks
https://steemit.com/poetry/@mrblu/poem-could-this-be-love-i-m-feeling-right-now
thanks
The electrification of the air around two lovers due to the charge between them is probably one of the most poetic and beautiful things out there. You managed to express this love, so alive and so real, perfectly! Well done, and thank you for sharing!
PS: If you are interested and have some spare time, I have some poetry on my blog too. :)
I love everything about this, the lines, the colors, the poetry! Get it boo!!!
thanks for reading @jadae