Encounter
Turned the trees to stone
And the land was naked
And the ponds were cold,
Barely could the dryads
Slip from tree to tree
In the wistful, haunting song
Of winter...
I looked into her face
And our breath met,
A charade of words
And I longed to forget
The tree on tree that
Stretched away
And charmed the mind to sleep.
But then with one toss
Of her amber hair
Sunlight returned
And by her chair
Cold flowers were placed.
Gone was the shadow
Across my mind
And I was alone
In summertime.
Wow I felt the emotion...I love the poem...and the picture ...beautiful abstract art :) upvoted..followed and resteemed :) :)
thanks, kayleigh
You are very welcome :) :)
Really nice. :-) resteemed.
thank you, athena!
You deserved it :-)
I agree I also resteemed it.😀
That warmth of our lover's presence.
yes... and a more traditional form of verse for this one
the cold of winter? alone in summer? hmmmm
Upvoted, Joe
ha ha, she was an enchantress and changed the season with a toss of her amber hair. I know someone who does that :)
ha ha on me, I never could get poetry
the connections aren't as obvious and sometimes the connectives are left out - that's why they say you have to read between the lines :)
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You capture the essence of love so eloquently. Bravo! :)
thanks, tina
Very splendid! <3 I like the 9th verse best. I wish I could be your apprentice hahaha. But really, this is very nice. :)) Great Job @johnjgeddes
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thanks
This really touched me. Thank you for putting a spark in my day!
I'm glad, @cryptomam. Thanks for your response
In trouble again?
You know my poems are always about my wife :)