SteemitPoetryContest #4 - I HATE THE NIGHTSsteemCreated with Sketch.

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 Hi Steemians! 🤗

I'm very excited to share to you guys my entry for @terrycraft's Poetry Contest #4. My poem is entitled "I HATE THE NIGHTS" and this week's theme is Emptiness. I hope you will like it! 🙂 


I hate the nights when I feel so broken inside,
Feels like I'm the groom, loneliness is my bride
My ego-wounded self is filled with false belief,
That I'm not good enough, my confidence was stolen by a thief

I hate the nights when I feel so lost inside,
I'm now intoxicated with madness and pride
Feeling numb for giving myself too much scars,
Just like night time: cold and dark but without moon and stars

I hate the nights when I feel so empty inside,
Depression doesn't want to leave by my side
Being broken, lost, empty are good friends of mine
They never tell all the thoughts that I tried to confine.




 P.S.

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I'm lost for words this poem is great sir 😊

Hanging out with friends sometimes help in being lonely.

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Hey @johnalexius, didn't know you were also a poet. Will definitely resteem

Make some poems also @fona! You can join the contest 🙂 Thank you for appreciating the post 😃

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