SteemitPoetryContest #3 - DROWNING IN THE SEA OF EMOTIONSsteemCreated with Sketch.

in #poetry7 years ago


Hi Steemians! 🤗

This is my first time to try posting an entry for a contest here in Steemit! I'm very excited to share to everyone my entry for @terrycraft's Poetry Contest entitled, "DROWNING IN THE SEA OF EMOTIONS".  I hope you will like it! 🙂


DROWNING IN THE SEA OF EMOTIONS

Bit by bit, I am changing
What happened to me was devastating
I tried to stop overthinking
But here I am now, completely sinking

Down here is dark and cold
My body can no more hold
Death is now in control
I'm screaming, please let me go!

I am now at the peak of my emotion
Reaching the bottom where time is in slow motion
Should have listened to the premonition
Trusting you, made me lose my reputation. 


 

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DEEP. may pinaghuhugutan. Labb it!

Thank you @lyxng! Sana manalo tayo haha

oo nga eh. di ako sinwerte last week. :D

Very nice. Best of luck with the contest! I will be checking in :P
Upvoted.

Thank you for appreciating the poem @jonbest! 🙂

Nice one! Very expressive poem. Well done bro! goodluck

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Nice poem.

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