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RE: Support Your Local Labyrinth [Day 30]
I enjoyed reading this. It felt like each line and stanza was a tangible thing given life through bored exacting description through action. Like the birds playing in the museum fountain. I hear splashes.
Like the rope tomatoes from the garden; I see the vines and bugs flying around the flowers.
At times I was confused about the speaker. Was it a cat, a bird, or a human. I couldn't tell. Perhaps that was your struggle?
always my struggle, to be honest, and thank you so much for the words and read. <3