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RE: Haiku: Heat Wave in South Africa
And, for fun, to make it a haiku chase...
Woollen cloying haze
how can anybody work
sweating hands tools slip
(I explain a haiku chase in the top of this post: https://steemit.com/haiku/@jenskohler/haiku-chase-based-on-generals-of-napoleon-1-duroc-the-shadow-of-the-emperor-by-herverisson)
Sweating hands tools slip
anxiety consuming
paralysing fear
paralysing fear
is an impossible task
rather dance with fear
rather dance with fear
a precipitous knife edge
amid the thunder
amid the thunder
between lightning's edges keen
may we step lightly
may we step lightly
into the dawn of the day
demons undisturbed