The Rippling Exigent

iwrite (58)in #poetry • 7 years ago

I intoxicatedly howled deleteriously the day you cast down my ardor,
it begets an harrowingly futile throbbing of joyful bitterness,
dredge with dust of unsavory flakes, I grated relentlessly mine asininity,
in bits I infused a cold cuts of love, I live profoundly distress, sleeping.

San Mateo, Rizal
October 10, 2017

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7 years ago in #poetry by iwrite (58)

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tegoshei (68) 7 years ago

Why is this so full of hurt? xD
Nevertheless, keep on living...

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iwrite (58) 7 years ago

When it hurts... Does it mean I care? I mean the character in the poem....

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tegoshei (68) 7 years ago

It's either you care... or you're being selfish.. HAHAHA xD

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iwrite (58) 7 years ago

Hayun o! Thanks tegoshei!

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tegoshei (68) 7 years ago

np sir.. ^^

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purpledaisy57 (63) 7 years ago

Hmmm sounds like food... cold cuts hehe but seems angry

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iwrite (58) 7 years ago

Sounds like... pero between the lines lies the... Lol! Secret! Thanks mam purpledaisy57!

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emdesan (57) 7 years ago

Na-nosebleed po ako sir hehe pero ang ganda po ng poetry niyo promise!

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iwrite (58) 7 years ago

Ay mam... makakagawa ka rin nito... Malapit na! Thanks emdesan!

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jhiecortez (45) 7 years ago

yup, me too @jovema..

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iwrite (58) 7 years ago

Makakagawa ka rin mam jhiecortez... in the future...

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ishteldalosa (53) 7 years ago

Ang galling niyo po pala sir tumula. Nosebleed. haha

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iwrite (58) 7 years ago

Ay salamat mam ishteldalos... E, baka nakatsamba lang ako mam... Maikli tula ko mam... kahit busy, e, tumula na rin.

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