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RE: Dangerous thoughts. (original)

in #poetry7 years ago

Using symbols or figure of speech can sometimes add an extra feeling... But how it ends up that way, I'm thinking about it next to impossible.

We as a reader, at least, give us some time where this stanza will lead to that and end up to that conclusion.

I've read a lot of poems that even the readers lost in space when a thought or feeling is lacking and end up abruptly...

I'm not critiquing, I'm looking for something that might justify every line I've read. Nice poem.

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thank you for your feedback, its always good to get some advice.
haha im still new to this but its nice to get the feedback, thanks

No worries. I'm just like you, feeling the words we express...

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