POETRY CHALLENGE (DAY 5) ; The GAP

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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When I have to talk about it
I start pathetic and end with rage
That's just the way it is.
I'm reminded I can't flip the page

When you get to talk about it
I start with tears and end in pain
That's just the way it is
You are made aware I fell like the rain

When i see other possibilities
I start with strength but then I start to shake
That's just the way it is
I realise, that isn't me

When you become my world
I start with tears and end with tears
That's just the way it is
You can't fill the gap
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Thanks for reading lovelies...

I'd really be glad to read your comments on this poem.. and for the previous , i thank you all for the time and support. 😊😊😊

Have a nice day steemians.

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wow, never key you were such good with poetry like that.

nice work

Lol😁😁 I'm just seeing this.

I think i made a typo error there... Lol

Another lovely poem by at @icequeenlove. Yeah it happens, we attack an opportunity head on and with full steam and then we're faced by the horrors and blockades trolling in that opportunity and we begin to tremble, not knowing whether we can finish as we started, but fear not cause all is well.

Nice poem again,thanks for sharing always ,I really love it.

This is to inform on the behalf of @d-pend that your post has been seen for the 100 day challenge. Keep up the good work.

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