Nothing like stepping out of the comfort zone!
I really like these two lines.
Heels clack and snap within the slats
Swooning into the arms of capable chaps
My brain stopped after reading them. Like it does when seeing something beautiful.
Keep up the creative process :)
Me thinks you might be a little bit of a hopeless romantic. You found the one semi-cute line in a poem about hookers.
I do the same thing though, sometimes I'll stop and read one part over and over as if I didn't appreciate it fully the first time. These are few and far between.