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RE: Abide with me

in #poetry5 years ago

"Abide with me, ye fallen angels,
tattered wings & all.
Stretch your feet towards the fire
& regale me with tales of heaven.
Pretend, tonight,
under yonder moon light,
that we are saints & martyrs.
Pretend that we will find heaven again."

I love this opening section...Something about it just appeals...Maybe the part about saints and martyrs indicating the good and bad in humanity...I don't know...like it though.

Sent to @curangel mate...Plus, there's a typo in your line three...I corrected it in this comment. (You instead of your)

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Yeah it touched me in a way too. Thank you for noticing the error. I will correct it immediately. Thank you for your kind words too. I appreciate. BTW Happy new year🎉🤗. I have been off for a few.

You're welcome, and all the best for a great 2020...Let's make it so. :)

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