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RE: Removing Valentine's

in #poetry7 years ago

I liked this one. Valentine's Day like all the rest is so utterly and hopelessly commercialized. Your fuck you to towing the line is well noted and the aggressiveness of it all is channeled so superbly into erotic fantasy. Great stuff. I loved reading it, especially the line,

tug on my toes with my calf in your mouth

I don't know why but it sounded really sexy yet smart. Thanks!

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It makes me sick seeing all the Valentine's cards three weeks before; like Christmas decorations up before Halloween. No thank you.

This is very high praise! Thank you for sharing it. I'm honored.

I'm glad you liked that image! Like a total foot, leg, and skin sensation but in a different way.

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